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Near vibrant flowers, emerald vines
curl and crawl across covered meadows.

They embrace, black vines dancing
upon skin. Glorious body art.

Dark ink curls, blossoming first
flowers, flourishing sweet summer.

Yet tips bare brown fruit, withered
wrinkled skin as amber sheds life.

Ink fades grey, dancing patterns cease
as vines drop last fruit into fresh snow.
The first serious poem that I wrote for Creative Writing :3 It was accepted for an anthology as well!
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations! That's awesome.

I really like this. The imagery is awesome. (Apparently the only word I can think of is awesome lol.)
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dwkeiko Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww :hug:
That's ...awesome XD haha
Thank you so much!
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vespera Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats!!!
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dwkeiko Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :D
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Really nice! And congratulations on having it accepted to an anthology :D Well done!
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dwkeiko Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww... Thank you so much! :D
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Ridderkvinden Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
You're very welcome :D Keep up the good work :D
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