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Umbrella

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Rain poured from the grey clouds, drenching the brown soil. I watched the weather from the inside of my apartment, watching every drop as it hit the ground.

However, that wasn't the only thing that captured my eyes. Standing at the bus stop was a young man, looking in his twenties. He stood tall against the storm, holding a mere umbrella.

How it help up for this long was beyond me. The wind blew it inside out, leaving the man soaked. He had no reason to hold onto it anymore, yet his fingers wouldn't let go of the handle. He stood as a statue, waiting for the bus.

The rain kept falling.
Prompt flash inspired... I don't know, I kinda like this one, for only being a few paragraphs X3
I feel like it could make a great poem too!
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Seriously, this almost brought a tear to my eye. The scene was just so damn vivid I could see it all with my own eyes. I believe there is a strong profound meaning in this, or it's maybe just me who sees it; Sometimes I am that man... needless to say the bus never comes :D
Anyway, I loved this, totally one of my faves, and I mean it! :)